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I'm a British citizen who loves to read, write and watch movies. I hope you enjoy my Movellas and Happy Reading!

  • PenToPaper
    This is pretty good so far and has potential :) However, I do want to point out that there are a few grammatical errors. If you're unsure, try copying the chapter into a Word document and it should highlight them for you :) Other than that, good start
    Taking Chances
    Taking Chances
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    Alaska Thomas is 16 years old, ever since she was a little girl she watched the Olympics with her dad every year. But her most favorite part was gymnastics, every day of her life is half reality with...
    Forevski
    4 years ago
    I also wanted to say there is another website for writing, like movellas but a little more serious. I'm thinking it wont be much of a problem for you! Maybe you should give it a try.
    PenToPaper
    4 years ago
    Okay, what is it called?
    Forevski
    4 years ago
    I will have to get back to you on that one, my cousin uses it, I'll have to ask her what it's called
  • PenToPaper

    mumbled "Update: "Suicide""

    Oops, sorry, I updated this by writing a "short" story about how pressure can kill. However, it was a little longer than expected and it added 20 minutes to the reading time. Sorry :/ But I'm proud of this chapter :)
  • PenToPaper
    This sounds like it could have good potential, the story line sounds great! But, there are a few SPAG (spelling, punctuation and grammar) errors, so I suggest a review? Good start though! :D
    why me
    why me
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    Clary has never been normal and when she moves to a town in Britain, she meets this guy and some friends are hiding something. She knows it but will they turn out to be like her?
  • PenToPaper

    mumbled "Comments and stuff..."

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    So, basically, I've found that when I write new stories, although I get views, I don't get much CC (or many comments for that matter!) and this really makes me wonder what the point is. My parents don't care about my writing, so I turn to people on here, but even tht doesn't happen :'( I promise that from now on, if you comment on my story, I will read one of yours and comment too. Comment for a comment exchange! :) please wonderful writers out there, this means a lot to me and I love writing so much! :) x
    smith121
    1 weeks ago
    Buying a business does not have to be a complicated endeavor when the proper process and methodology is followed. In this article, we outline eleven specific steps that should be adhered to when buying a business and bank financing is planned to be utilized. <a href="https://thegeneralworld.com/jared-leto-j.. Leto Joker</a>
    smith121
    1 weeks ago
    Buying a business does not have to be a complicated endeavor when the proper process and methodology is followed. In this article, we outline eleven specific steps that should be adhered to when buying a business and bank financing is planned to be utilized.
    [url=https://thegeneralworld.com/jared-leto-j..]Jared Leto Joker[/url]
    smith121
    1 weeks ago
    We have all been there... trying to figure out the best ways to get ahead. We are always in search of the next "big thing"... We are constantly trying to find that edge that can separate us from the competition. Why do some people achieve elite success and others, well, others just flounder? There are specific steps we all must do in order to stand high and mighty, on top of that hill. These can and will create a tremendous foundation for anyone navigating through their home business blueprint! Cladogram
  • PenToPaper

    mumbled "Lack of updating.... again!"

    I want to say the deepest apologies to my lack of updating recently. I am going through year 13 (17-18) and I am super stressed at the moment, so I don't have much free time to update anything :( I will try at some point, possibly have to wait until after January mock exams though... Sorry :/
    PenToPaper
    5 years ago
    I do try to find motivation, but I procrastinate too much! :P No, it's not too bad, but I have to complete the first draft before the 18th January, which sounds ages away, but I also have mock revision to do at the same time! Just stressing me out at the moment!
    Midnight Rogue
    5 years ago
    Urgh, mocks... I never do well in mocks XD
    PenToPaper
    5 years ago
    I did alright last year, I just think I'm not going to do very well this time :/
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