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Hello! I'm Beth, I'm 15 and I love to write short stories and poems:)

  • TW_Beth
    vor 7 JahrenAntworten
    As a proper critique I must admit that your writing skills need to develop, but otherwise this is great. The plot is good, it's just sentence structure etc. Can't wait to read more!
    The loser and the Bully
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    Crystal a.k.a The Loser is well... a loser. She can't walk through the hallway without being tripped. Everybody laughs about what a geek she is and her worst enemy is Sarah, the school's popular girl...
  • TW_Beth
    vor 7 JahrenAntworten
    I like this. I like the line that says 'Love is like a Rose pretty and fragile but also has it's thorns.' It's true, you can get hurt so easily, it's a fragile thing. Wow <3


    If you get time, could you check out mine?
    Sonnet 1(30)My entry for the Valentine's Day competition. My sonnet in the style of Shakespeare's Sonnet 130. Please like, as even being the 3rd runner up would be...
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    Love is like
    Love is like
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    My description of love :) hope you enjoy <3
  • TW_Beth
    vor 7 JahrenAntworten
    I love the resume reference to One Thing! :D:D Amazing! Was it intentional?;)


    If you get time, could you check out my entry for the valentines day competition?
    Sonnet 1(30)My entry for the Valentine's Day competition. My sonnet in the style of Shakespeare's Sonnet 130. Please like, as even being the 3rd runner up would be...
    <-- (This is just something I put at the end of every comment. Promotion reasons;) You might like it!:))
    Struggling for survival // 1D
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    One thing can change a persons life.
  • TW_Beth
    vor 7 JahrenAntworten
    Wow, this is really good. It's very true.
    My Idea Of Love
    My Idea Of Love
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    Hi, this is my entry for the valentine competion. I hope that you all like it, I only put up here incase I get positive feedback which would really help right now :S We all have a bit of an idea of love,...
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