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I Don't Know What These Are

von , Freitag November 2, 2018
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 I Don't Know What These Are

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  • John Bryan

    mumbled "Nibbled"

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    Part 37
    I have once again nibbled at the opening chapter of my story Demon Hunter, I have cut out the first few paragraphs shortening what was already a short chapter to get rid of what I feel was a load of exposition and instead cut straight to the heart of that beginning, whether or not the changes are an improvement I'm not sure but I've done it now and probably won't undo it.
  • John Bryan

    mumbled "How Many is too Many"

    vor 1 MonatenAntworten

    I don't know how anyone else feels about it, but looking at this photo of Adam Levine frontman of Maroon 5 this is my personal opinion I think he has too many tattoos.

    Yes I know it's all a matter of personal taste, I get that but I don't get why he needs that many.

    Which brings me to my question, how many is too many?
    Mister Tea
    vor 1 Monaten
    More than two is too much if you ask me.
    Rain Evangeline
    vor 1 Monaten
    Each to their own... but that it one heck of a lot!!!
  • John Bryan
    vor 2 MonatenAntworten
    This is cool and a great start to an intriguing story, I look forward to reading more.

    One issue I'm not sure about the font change. Is it intentional, on more than one occasion I've published chapters and found afterwards that paragraphs had different fonts for some reason.

    If it is a choice I think it should start with the paragraph after Penelope was going to die as unless I'm reading it wrong that is when it shifts to Azazel's perspective.

    Anyway the story styling choices are obviously entirely up to you and as I say it's a great start to a story.
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    Victoria Wethers
    vor 1 Monaten
    the font change was accidental, thanks for reading though!
  • John Bryan

    mumbled "The Grand Finale"

    vor 2 MonatenAntworten
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    This is the end, my friend we've reached number ten on the list of my top ten list of favourite movies.

    FYI anyone who had not read or even seen any of these I was nominated by @[Midnight Rogue] to do this, so also of note I don't need to provide any explanation for the films chosen.

    Drum roll, as Number 10 the final entrant on the list is... Lethal Weapon

    My previous entries on the list, posted in no particular order of preference were
    9th The Matrix
    8th Back to the future
    7th Star Trek
    6th Looper
    5th The Raid
    4th Gravity
    3rd L.A. Confidential
    2nd Serenity
    1st Crimson Tide
    Mister Tea
    vor 2 Monaten
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    Lethal Weapon probably makes my list of top ten favourite films from the 1980's, yes I have something approaching a list I was going to do a blog awhile back compiling my top ten favs from every decade from the 80's to this one. One or two of those film might even have made it to my preliminary list from the decade they were released in.

    Anyway I see you have finished this list and you didn't nominate me. Okay if that's how it's gonna be. If that's how you wanna play it from now on. Well you are no longer invited to read my mumbles, there how'd you like them apples.
    John Bryan
    vor 2 Monaten
    Yeah I guess I could have picked you, I looked through my list of followers so I don't know why I didn't. I can nominate you now if you still want to do it.
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