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Hey! I'm Beautifully Hemmings --> Perfect has 7 letters and so does meeeeee. Coincidence? I think not.

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* "Pain is temporary. It may last for a minute, or an hour, or a day, or even a year but eventually it WILL subside, and something else will take it's place. If I quit however, it will last forever." - Eric Thomas *

* “You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world...but you do have some say in who hurts you. I like my choices.”
― John Green, The Fault in Our Stars *

* Hemmings, Horan, Mendes, Grier, Dallas, Johnson, Gilinsky, Levine, Hutcherson, O'Brien, Hood, Irwin, Clifford, Styles, Tomlinson, Payne <3 *

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  • Beautifully Hemmings
    Danngggg this is good and intriguing! I CANNOT wait to read mooorrrreeeeee (there is going to be more right? XD)
    Here are the couple things I noticed:
    The last sentence of the second paragraph seems a little bit run on so I would suggest splitting it up a little bit with another comma or making it two sentences.
    I believe the colon after "it is not made" should be a semi colon or comma though I'm not 100% sure.
    Delete the word "and" between "creaks" and "that" in paragraph 7. I also thought there should be a "my" after "that"????
    That is all i noticed! I love the story I'm glad I took the time to read it :) :) :) <3
    Blink Boy
    Blink Boy
    vor 2 Jahren
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    Thank you for all your feedback - this is so helpful! Thank you!! :)
  • Beautifully Hemmings

    mumbled "Hi Everyone!"

    Sorry for being gone (inactive) for the past week! I was at my cabin and the whole week and there is literally NO internet connection or like LTE or anything there so I couldn't work on my stories or come say hi :( Anyway I'm hoping to finish that chapter of Confusion I talked about, like, a week and a half ago XD and maybe get something going on Steal My Girl of 5STLY, we will see. :)
  • Beautifully Hemmings

    mumbled "In regards to my previous mumble:"

    So I said I'd have a story updated tonight and so I decided to write a bunch on Confusion.
    And then I realized that I kind of need to have my co-authors look at the chapter and like help edit it and stuff so I guess I lied - We'll have an update out hopefully tomorrow! Sorry guys! I'm really trying hard to get better with my updating scheduele!
    Beautifully Music Nerd
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    If you wanted to update Confusion I can read it real quick and we can update. I doubt it has many mistakes anyways :)
    Beautifully Hemmings
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    Lol thanks for your confidence in me XD I think I'm going to try and make it a little longer now though since it's getting late here anyway and I have some time tomorrow XD XD
    Beautifully Music Nerd
    Okay XD
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