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  • the gem that trapped
    the gem that trapp...
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  • ztofly
    5 years agoReply
    I like the story I espcially liked the hook and chapter 11. It meets the length requirement too. You need more characters.
    The Life Emerald
    The Life Emerald
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    Gabriel was at the park in Beirut ,Lebanon when he heard gun shots coming from his house and he also saw a fire. Gabriel has to get the life emerald to save his family from death and the World from slavery...
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