FemaleNorwayMember since 9 Apr 12Last online 3 years ago

I just got somewhat back into writing, but I'm far from a writer. I may sit down from time to time and write, simply because I enjoy it, but the day I do it despite not wanting it is the day I stop writing. I'm a big fan of many different books, but especially books with themes like survival and social breakdowns, and I have somewhat odd obsession with zombies. This is also reflected in my first text here so far, all though I hope to publish more as I go along.

I would love to get your opinion on my text, good or bad. All I wish is to learn and get inspired, and I take all the help I can get.

  • kristine_s_l
    Another chapter added, feedback is greatly appreciated ^^
    The Apocalypse
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    What would you do if life was no longer to taken for granted, but something you had to earn. How would you react if your whole world changed, your loved ones died and you had to learn how to live all over...
  • kristine_s_l

    mumbled "Feelin' the love"

    I'm very thankfull for the people who have commented on my story so far and given me feedback, and I feel that it really motivates me to write more, especially since this has gotten me to sit down and write nearly 1,5 chapters in one day. Thank you so much, and I must say that I'm glad I decided to post here, it has really helped me in getting on with the writing.
  • kristine_s_l
    Amazingly well written, was acctually at work when reading this, but despite that I couldn´t put it away. Very gripping and horrifying at the same time, especially being a young girl myself. My heart was pounding with anger and fear during the whole time, and over all a very interesting and good read. Thanks.
    Stockholm Syndrome
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    First place winner of the Apr-May Picture Prompt Competition. A strange unknown man, with an obsession with capturing attractive girls find his perfect beauty and documents their 'quality' time together....
    D.B. Fairless
    6 years ago
    You should be working and not reading my movella! :D ha so glad you loved it, it is a bit disturbing like but I don't think I over did the horror aspect, more psychological :) was very fun to write, thinking of doing a sequel
    kristine_s_l
    6 years ago
    You should. And no worries, nothing to do here anyways! I would read the sequel at least. Kinda reminds me of a book I read a couple of weeks back, "Kill me once". Gave me the same kind of chills.
  • kristine_s_l
    I really enjoyed this text, really reminded me of my childhood when I was all into shapeshifter books (can´t remember the name of the series unfortunately). It really grabs my attention and gives me the drive to read more. I personally prefer longer paragraph, but hey that might just be me. And I agree on the part with long chapters, I think it´s a good choice on your part. I would suggest going over and double checking your punctuation and tenses though, but that´s just nit picking. But all in all, really good. Can´t wait for chapter two.
    Cat's Eye
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    There has always been something different and unusual about Miranda Wilkson. Her mother went missing when she was young and her father became a drunk. She doesn't have many friends, and prefers sweatshirts...
    SinfullyRiddling
    6 years ago
    Thank you for your comment! I can tell you really put time into it :) haha. Shapeshifters are indeed pretty interesting! I prefer longer paragraphs as well. :') Sometimes they tend to get boring though, so I try to add dialogue as often as I can to hold the reader's attention. Thank you for your support! And yes, I will try to go over and look for those types of errors when I have a moment. If you have any specific gramatical errors, feel free to point them out. :L Haha thank you so much! :x
  • kristine_s_l
    Liked the story, but probably should have corrected the grammar though. But the overall feel of the story was awesome. And I agree, zombies rule!
    Zombie Contingency Plan
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    I found a Zombie eating my cat this morning..its gonna be one of them days
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