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I'm a self-proclaimed creative writer and passionate music and film lover.

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  • So...There's This Thing...
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  • Happiness
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  • E-X-P-O-S-E-D
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  • Z.H.
    4 years agoReply
    So, I am REALLY happy that you all are reading my work, but I would also really appreciate some written feedback...kthanksbye :3
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    Elle is a junior in college with a daily routine. One day, while waiting for her subway train, she happens to take a seat next to a terrifying young man. This description pretty much relates to the...
  • Z.H.

    mumbled "New Fiction!"

    4 years agoReply
    Ok! So, I think I remember telling you all that I am working on a fiction piece. Well, for those of you who didn't know...now you know! It's actually quite dark and so I caution you to read it at your own discretion! But I have written two chapters so far and would like some feed back. It's called: "Playing Pretend" (kind of a working title, but I think it...works...for now haha!) Thanks and enjoy! :)
  • Z.H.

    mumbled "So...There's This Thing..."

    4 years agoReply
    Hot 99.5 is holding a contest for basically all One Direction fans everywhere for a chance to win two front row tickets to their concert in June in Washington, D.C. (6/23) AND two pre-show passes to take a picture (or two or three) with the boys and meet them etc., etc.

    NOW, the reason I entered is this: these boys are amazing! They're role models for boys much younger than them to those who hold seniority over them by several years. They are caring, thoughtful, honest (to themselves and others), good, loving boys who should be told (if they aren't told enough by their mommas and daddys) "you are something special, and I am proud of you". And that's why I want to win, I want to tell them this in person and give them a hug for all their goodness. It would be an honor. Also, if I win, I'd really only want a pre-show pass (I'm not very good with loud noises, dark, crowded places, and flashing lights...*shudders* that's just a recipe for disaster in my book), so, honestly, I'd give the front row tickets away. No gimmicks, no strings attached. I'd honestly give the concert tickets away for reasons listed previously. Now, of course, I would not give the pre-show passes away, BUT I'd definitely try everything I could to get the lucky girls to whom I gave away my tickets pictures with the boys. :)
    So...yeah! Haha! Um, please, please, PLEASE follow the link below, copy and paste it, and (by doing simply that) vote for me! It's really easy! Just follow the link and BOOM! You voted for me! Do it as many times as you can (or, as you like I suppose) to get me--and those two other girls I'd give my tickets to--tickets and pictures and pre-show passes!! >.<
    Thank you oh so much, it really means the world to me. :)

    HERE'S THE LINK:----> hot995.com/c/?6bl <----
    iBananas4
    4 years ago
    I lost track of how many times I opened that link :) hope it worked and helps! :) good luck!!
    Z.H.
    4 years ago
    Oh my goodness! Thanks so much! :D
    iBananas4
    4 years ago
    :) anytime
  • Z.H.
    4 years agoReply
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    Talk about powerful! Again, loved the way you broke down and defined the word "sacrifice" for all to understand. I do suggest changing a few lines: "sacrifice/ different to all point of views;" "A sacrifice/ is to give up a possession/ your time/ your toy/ your energy;"<(all things relating to children physically and metaphysically) "For lovers/ A sacrifice/ is to forget/ forget about/ your wishes/ my dreams/ to make one future;" "For the religious/ a sacrifice/ is of human flesh/ for all to be blessed/ death for life/ pain for joy/ shame for peace/ all suffered/ for us;"<(the previous line were all short and to the point, trying to keep that repetition going) "sacrifice/ would you sacrifice/ your everything/ just/ for/ me?" :)

    also, I think either poems would work very well for your poetry slam. Although, I am leaning more towards "Sacrifice" and thus agreeing with Melissa. Ultimately it's up to you! Feel confident that whichever you choose, you're choosing a great one! :D
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    Im a poet I didn't even know So you like poetry? Maybe you'll like mine.
    94931355
    4 years ago
    I agree that "Sacrifice" would work really well at a poetry slam. A little revising, as Zelezele suggested, would do good (are we ever really done revising?).
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