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  • Zaynshakesitup16
    I love your stories. But I hate how you end them with the main character dying. It makes the story point less. Not every ending has to be happy. Just don't get our hopes up too much. This is just feedback for your future fanfic a.
  • Zaynshakesitup16
    Please keep updating this.! I can't wait this long! :/
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    Slowly he placed his hand on my waist, gripping at the material that covered my skin. My breath caught in my throat as he slid his hand down to my ass and gave it a playful squeeze before dipping his head...
  • Zaynshakesitup16
    I really like the story... But the fact that you stated that Zayn doesn't believe in god and brining god into sex isn't very polite.. I'm sorry.
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    "Remember when I promised to love you forever?" "Yes?" "Forever isn't over yet."
    Emily A. H.
    4 years ago
    I don't find it impolite in any way, since you use the term God very often. I respect God, like I respect any other religion, but it is a fact that Zayn doesn't believe in God and therefore I don't see it as a problem. I'm sorry if I offended you in any way.
    Emily A. H.
    4 years ago
    I guess that I will have to be more careful with what I write, since a lot of different people read this story. I deleted the sentence, realizing that it possibly could offend people. Pardon.
    And thanks for liking the story. xx
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