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Just a girl who hunts demons with Jace, trained at camp half blood, was confirmed divergent in an aptitude test but chose dauntless and ate cake with Tobias.
twitter @notamundie

  • yasmine-blackwright
    Not very good? It's AWESOME! Mine looks like scribbles compared to this.
    Death and Co. Art
    Death and Co. Art
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    This is my entry for the death and co art competition. It is a pencil sketch of Adam Mortson. I'm not very good, but I did my best; hope you like it!
    Emma Bird
    4 years ago
    thanks and I'm sure it doesn't :)
  • yasmine-blackwright
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    Really like it! The idea is so original and cool and your really good at writing too! I like your style of writing. :)
    The Replacement
    The Replacement
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    Clones have one purpose: to replace deceased children. But some people have other ideas. Ariya is in trouble. She and her Clone are running. To the other side. Will they make it before they're caught?
  • yasmine-blackwright
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    My favourite part is:
    "When I walk out the store, yeah, this is what I see
    Katniss Everdeen is a-staring at me
    I got a loaf in my hand
    And I aint afraid to throw it, throw it, throw it

    I'm Peeta and I know it.
    The Hunger Games song parodies
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    My versions of pop songs that I have changed into funny hunger games related songs- the hunger games belongs to suzzanne collins and not me. If you have any song preferences that you would like me to...
  • yasmine-blackwright
    I like it! Try not to use her name so much and just say she instead because there is only one girl in the room (Marissa) and one man (her step-dad) so the reader will know who is who anyway. I'm looking forward to reading this! :-) can you read mine and point out anything I can improve. I think I need to work on it.
    To Walk On Water
    To Walk On Water
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    Main Character: Marissa - A young girl who's parents are divorced, she is then sent to live with her Aunt Juniper and her two annoying cousins (who push her around and get her in trouble) by her new step-father. Other...
    xxAngelxx
    4 years ago
    Thank you so much for your advise :D I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I think I did this first chapter a bit short so I'm thinking about adding more, and of course I'll yours ;)
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