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  • xxhannahhhbeexx
    In my opinion I think you should tell more of a story with it and add more metaphors and similes eg the earth is a misunderstood creature dominated by those that live in its walls. Controlled by the forces that take place under its skin. Forces that cause tidal waves of beauty and destruction upon the sands of today
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    Some poems I am writing for a school project. Please give me feed back on what I could do better.
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