FemaleNetherlandsMember since 24 Jul 14Last online 2 years ago

Write me a Story.

  • writergirl16

    mumbled "Someone English please help me with my grammar -->"

    Is it correct: "After all that, and she's falling for him too, he's in love with a goth, but doesn't become one too."
    or: "After all that, and he's falling for him too, he's in love with a goth but doesn't become one too."
    or better: "After all that, and she's falling for him too, he's in love with a goth. But doesn't become one too."

    Please tell me the correct form!! I'm in need!
    Thanks!
    -xo-
    Danielle Paige
    3 years ago
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    "After all that, and she's falling for him too. He's in love with a goth, but doesn't become one too." < I would say this is right. :)
    writergirl16
    3 years ago
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    Thankyou very much!
  • writergirl16
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    You're really good. You write fast without any rambling and that's one of the things that makes this story so strong. I love it, keep up the good work :)
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