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I love reading. And writing. A LOT!

I don't have any particular favourite books. Or rather I have too many favourites to actually list in a reasonable amount of space. I have probably been in to or obsessed with nearly every genre of book at some point in my life.

I also write on fanfiction.net.

I am a Latter-day Saint, or Mormon as we are commonly known. I love both my own religion and learning more about other religions and worldviews. I am fascinated by faith of all kinds.

I like pretty much all kinds of books (provided they're good, of course). Fantasy, thriller, action, adventure, sci-fi, horror, mystery/detective, philosophical, plus more......

And yeah, that's pretty much me.

  • wordwright
    4 years agoReply
    Oooh, somethings going on here....I like it...a lot. ;)
    Ive said this before but youre very good (particularly in this movella) at creating a mood...I mean, in this on, in this chapter, I just had this sense of dread the whole time and it was just horrible and uncomfortable and mysterious and horrifying and awesome. :D
    I hope that was the kind of feeling ypu were going for anyway, cause its really effective if you were. :)
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    I had a very strange dream the other night, which resultyed in my coming up with this little... Story. I am not exactly sure where i9t is going or anything but I really felt I needed to write it. It...
    ldsauthorsb16
    4 years ago
    that's good, because that was the desired mood. ;)
    so I'm glad you picked up on it. :)
  • wordwright
    4 years agoReply
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    Hahaha. Haha. Hahaha. I love this. Like....oh my goodness. Words fail me. This is just.... Brilliant. Haha. Thank you.
    Legolas, another quest.
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    Fangirling over Legolas and Lord of the rings resulted in my starting to write this during school... Anyway it probably seems like a typical fangirl story ( girl meets character, falls in love, evil...
    ldsauthorsb16
    4 years ago
    Glad you liked it! ;)
  • wordwright
    4 years agoReply
    Ooh, this is really effective. I just read all the chapters through again and I don't think there's been a single point where I haven't been hooked. You do atmosphere really well; the whole thing feels really mysterious and there's just this whole underlying sense of wrongness which is really effective. Jodie herself is such an interesting character as well; I found myself really sympathising with her from pretty much the first chapter.
    I wonder if the very last line of 'Fair' would be more effective if it was shorter. Like, if it just said: 'But I didn't.' I don't know. It's your story. But the second part of the sentence seems a bit unnecessary, and I think the short sentence by itself is just like...I don't know. Bam. And leaves the reader hooked for the next chapter. I mean, I'm already hooked anyway, but I just think it might be even more effective with a shorter sentence.
    Also (although this kind of goes without saying with your writing).....nice cliffhanger. ;)
    Update soon. Please. :)
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    ldsauthorsb16
    4 years ago
    Thank you so much! :D :)
    And I will lOok into it when I can use the computer. :)
  • wordwright
    4 years agoReply
    *Dun dun DUUUN* (dramatic music seems appropriate for the ending. In fact, given your habit of ending things with cliffhangers and moments of high tension, dramatic music would work for the ending of most things that you write. Most of the ones I've read, anyway.)
    Ramblings about dramatic endings aside, I really like it! Ron x Luna made me do a double take, but with marriage law I guess anything is fair game....and you present all the characters perfectly, just their mannerisms and speech patterns and everything is exactly how I would expect them to respond...
    Yeah. I like it. :)
    Marriage law
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    Okay so... Normally this is more of the kind of thing you would get on fanfiction.net but... I don't have an account and prefer Movellas anyway to be honest, so this is a Marriage law fanfiction... So...
    wordwright
    4 years ago
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    Ok, how many chapters are you doing btw? O.o
    ldsauthorsb16
    4 years ago
    secret, quite a few. I have finished uploading for tonight though. ;)
    wordwright
    4 years ago
    Ooh, ok. As long as there's more. ;)
  • wordwright
    4 years agoReply
    Wow. This is amazing. I say that a lot about your stuff - and with good reason, every time - but this is different. Like really, its sort of....haunting and powerful in a way that is even more moving than most of your other stories, with the possible exception of mudblood. Really, I love it.
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    I had a very strange dream the other night, which resultyed in my coming up with this little... Story. I am not exactly sure where i9t is going or anything but I really felt I needed to write it. It...
    ldsauthorsb16
    4 years ago
    Thankyou :)
    I'm really really glad you like it. :)
    wordwright
    4 years ago
    To use a phrase which I believe has been used before....'like' is an understatement. :)
    ldsauthorsb16
    4 years ago
    Haha, your too cool ;)
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