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  • wordgal
    3 years agoReply
    What? Noooo... You can't leave it there!!! How could you?! This is worse than the Percabeth falling into Tartarus... No... Dammit Mel_Moose, this is too good to hate! You killed Percabeth but did it so well that I can't protest. Good job :-D
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    Mel_Moose
    3 years ago
    Thank you :3 and yeah, killing Percabeth hasn't been my finest hour, I'm most likely going to get slaughtered at school now by my friend who beta'd this for me XD
  • wordgal
    3 years agoReply
    N'aww! I was almost worried that you broke Percy. I never considered that it could be an oath made a long time ago... But wow. That was surprisingly fitting! Good job :-)
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    This is my own version of how The Blood of Olympus could end.
  • wordgal
    3 years agoReply
    ... Dang it, everyone want to make me cry. I liked this, I like how the gods (or Athena, at least) make an appearance. I think they should, to honour the heroes who fought so hard for them. And I liked that it was from Reyna's POV, I really like her as a character. Ooh, and the fact that Athena was upset over Annabeth, I've always wondered if the gods care when their children die, even though there's a lot of them. Yes, I enjoyed reading this :-)
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    Hi everyone, this is my entry for the Blood of Olympus: Alternate Ending Writing Competition. This is my first time doing something like this so I do hope you like it :) It's written from Reyna's point...
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    Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Same here, I love Reyna's character. I really do think the gods should have cared, hence why I portrayed that through Athena. Thank you again for reading it and enjoying :)
  • wordgal
    3 years agoReply
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    Ouch. First off, like Zoe-Marie said, I'm sorry if this doesn't count. It basically broke my feels. It's really good. And the part where Frank realised "the earth shaker. The Stormbringer" was like, chills! I love it :-D
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    My entry in Frank's POV for the Blood of Olympus competition. First time actually writing and completing something so hopefully it isn't too bad!
    ∂reamMu§e®
    3 years ago
    thanks :) i loved your story!
  • wordgal
    3 years agoReply
    I'm very disappointed that you sunk Caleo :-( But I'm glad you reunited the seven, and of course that Percy and Annabeth got married. Parts of it seem a bit rushed or abrupt, and you have a wobbly tense thing going on occasionally, where you slip from past to present or vise versa. But ing general it's sweet and I like it :-)
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    This is my story for the BoO competition. I wrote some of it before reading BoO and some of it afterwards.
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