FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 24 Jan 13Age 45Last online 1 years ago

I am a driving Instructor for a living but love writing books. I've written various children's books that I have published on Kindle. But am in the process of writing what I hope will be a film one day.

  • kristencook
    4 years agoReply
    absolutely great, you describe everything so well that I can really picture everything that's is going on. It almost makes you feel like your actually there. I also like the way that you said the flashback had finished so there could be no confusion. I like this very, very much so far and look forward to the next instalment.
    Moving On
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    Ariel Miller lost both the love of her life and their child in a horrific crash in 2010. 3 years have passed since then, and she moves from her one room apartment in Sydney - the city that holds too many...
    itsClearSkies
    4 years ago
    Thanks so much! (Haha, yeah I thought it was a better way of putting in 'flashbacks' without them all being in italics - It's a lot easier to read :P)
  • kristencook
    4 years agoReply
    I think this is a very good makes you want to keep reading, seems to take you on a roller coaster of emotions. Hope you write some more of this soon, wanted to read more, but sadly it finished. Will keep a watch for the next chapter.
    Moving On
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    Ariel Miller lost both the love of her life and their child in a horrific crash in 2010. 3 years have passed since then, and she moves from her one room apartment in Sydney - the city that holds too many...
    itsClearSkies
    4 years ago
    I'll be sure to, thanks for reading it so far - I'll let you know when the next chapter comes out :)
    kristencook
    4 years ago
    Ok will wait to hear from you, I will let you know when the next bit of car dealers paradise is on and would very much appreciate you comments. many thanks
    itsClearSkies
    4 years ago
    I've updated another chapter :)
  • kristencook
    4 years agoReply
    Absolutely beautiful poem, made me feel very emotional when I read it.
    An Ode to My Child
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    A poem about a mother who lost her son. This poem is dedicated to all the children we lost to cancer and their loving families, we salute your courage .you’ll always be in our hearts and you’re memory...
    potterjay
    4 years ago
    thanks a lot :D i'm glad you liked it :)
    kristencook
    4 years ago
    I will have a read of some of the others you have done. I will let you know when the next bit of car dealers paradise is on and would very much appreciate you comments. Oh and thanks for welcoming me to the website.
    potterjay
    4 years ago
    Thank you :) and yeah do let me know when there's an update to car dealers paradise and no problem :D
  • kristencook

    Car dealers paradise

    4 years agoReply
    Hi, I am new to the website and am looking to read other people's books in exchange for you reading the first instalment of my book, feel free to leave comments good or bad but please be honest. I will happily do the same.
    Many thanks
    itsClearSkies
    4 years ago
    Hi I'd glady read the first installment of your book if you could check out two of my movellas (if that's okay): February 14th
    February 14thValentines Day is defiantly not Rachel Sanders favourite day of the year... In all honesty, it's her least favourite day. After living in a life filled...
    and, Moving On
    Moving OnAriel Miller lost both the love of her life and their child in a horrific crash in 2010. 3 years have passed since then, and she moves from her one room...
    . If that's good with you :)
    potterjay
    4 years ago
    hi,and welcome to movella. i'll go and check it out now :)
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