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  • Vicky0412
    5 years agoReply
    I was really draw in. This is really good. :D
    Please my mystery story, Paranoia
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    Agent Louisa Grey is injured after a bomb destroys a crime scene, that she's searching. While she is in a hospital bed, the rest of the team must find the suspect before somebody else gets hurt or worse....
  • Vicky0412
    5 years agoReply
    hey, you told me to read this story, and I'm glad you did. The storyline is really original and I really feel for her. THank you for the really long comment you left with all the suggestions, it really helped and I altered my story, not it's much better thanks to you. Sorry my comment isn't as long but I'm not very good at suggestions, plus your story is wonderful as it is.
    Your Own Worst Enemy
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    Miranda is the daughter of one of the most famous actresses in the world, but her life is far from fabulous. The girls at school bully her mercilessly. Yet that is not her worst problem. Adnarim, a malevolent...
    R K Guron
    5 years ago
    Thank you for this lovely comment! It is all about quality, not quantity, and your comment has made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) I'm glad I could help you with yours! It was a nice story :)
  • Vicky0412
    5 years agoReply
    Hey, you told me to read your story and I did. I love how you did it with the voices of different people, then linked their stories. I've never seen a story written like this.
    Who I was
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    This covers both point of views but it gets you to see the bully's point of view... For comp P.S: don't bully whatever happens to you because it isn't a nice feeling for anyone and if you have troubles...
  • Vicky0412
    5 years agoReply
    I wrote this last year on a passing whim. Thanx for the comment and the like.
    The Unfortuante Life of an Orange
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    We live with millions of different objects around us everyday. But have you ever thought, if they could speak, what would they say. This is a short tale of a week in the life of an Orange.
  • Vicky0412
    5 years agoReply
    I really enjoyed this! It was amazing, you jabe a reall talent :D
    If You Tell Anyone I'll Kill You
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    Unnamed and worthless, Girl is forced to stay hidden from the outside world while her cruel parents inflict pain and terror upon her. Will this change or will Girl live a life of fright and misery forever?...
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