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  • Dear Dad...
    Dear Dad...
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  • Vay26
    6 years agoReply
    so true..I really enjoyed reading this poem
    Happy is not always an option
    Happy is not alway...
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    A poem about how some days I just feel like I cannot get out of bed and face the day :(
  • Vay26
    6 years agoReply
    I like this. I think this is a motivational poem-and I think people can relate to this. I think to improve it you could use some punctuation like full stops ie the line where it says I will dig out of the hole. I will dig it out myself. ect I think this would give it more of a rhythm and it would show more emotion of the character in the poem . If you have a chance could you have a look at mine please :)
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    sometimes i feel lonely sometimes i feel down sometimes i feel wired like i'm spinning around sometimes i feel i care too much sometimes i don't think but touch that's what lead me here in a...
  • Vay26
    6 years agoReply
    I like it. It's simple and a nice little poem with good use of description :)
    You remind me.
    You remind me.
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    a poem about what someone likes about some else.
  • Vay26
    6 years agoReply
    I love the ending of this poem - it's quirky and funny. I would never have guessed that type of ending :)
    Dear 'To The One I Love.'
    Dear 'To The One...
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    JohnnyDeppAddiction
    Hiya, thanks! Wasn't sure how to end it, thought I'd give it a bit of a twist :) x
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