MaleMember since 19 Mar 12Age 28Last online 6 years ago

UofA English major

  • UnfaithfulSolipsist
    Of the work that I have read I felt this to be the strongest so far, the flow of conciousness felt natural enough to allow for bold word choices, nice work!
    Smoke
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    They say barley smells like beer. I wouldn't know — all I can smell is smoke. Rich, choking smoke. It holds me but I am cold in its arms, beyond its warmth. [This was my entry to the picture prompt contest...
  • UnfaithfulSolipsist
    Your narrator has a very consistent voice, which I find really hard to do, nice work!
    The Uninteresting Account Of  Martin Storridge's Life
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    I had the idea for writing the fairly amusing memoirs of a man who, in all honesty, has done very little in his life and has suddenly realised as such. So often we read autobiographies from people who...
  • UnfaithfulSolipsist
    Hey I just joined this site today and started the first chapter of a short story, I already expect the second to be more difficult to write but it would be honest to get a frank opinion from someone, it seems that I might have to directly ask to get one haha
    Eat My Word Splurge
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    If you read nothing else on this site, you must read this. It may save you from committing ritual suicide in front of your family. NOTE: Formerly known as "Hot to Write a Story That Doesn't Suck" and...
    Whitman
    6 years ago
    Gonna be a couple of days, buddy. In the mean time, you could always have a look at some of my stuff.
    UnfaithfulSolipsist
    Will do
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