FemaleMember since 2 Feb 12Age 5Last online 5 years ago

Hi, I'm Rita, 13. I'm not usually a creepy writer! My stories are usually light-hearted and very rarely serious. I have commitment issues (with writing multi-chaptered stories) and I like butter. I'm a really nice person on the internets, so I guess you strangers are lucky.
I'm experimenting with romance, and I read adult-fiction, young adult-fiction and realism. I'm not too much of a fanfic writer.

  • undone
    6 years agoReply
    This is GOOD. Like, actually. Unbelievable. No offence, Movellas, but your stories aren't that great...

    You deserved to win! Well, place, I suppose. It doesn't matter ahaha!
    My Name Is –
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    This was originally for the Valentine's Day competition. The information said to write about love, so I did. My character is 'Love', who stopped believing in itself long ago. Edit: Oh my goodyness!...
    R K Guron
    6 years ago
    ;) Thank you!
  • undone
    6 years agoReply
    Hey, you're right! This story is actually pretty similar to mine, in the sense that each chapter is unrelated.
    Death and Life
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    Here is a sample of something ongoing. One of those days, it will develop into a story, but until I get there, this is all that's going to appear on this site :) Please let me know what you think!
    Rob Marvin
    6 years ago
    Ah, wait until the real story! And thanks!
  • undone
    6 years agoReply
    This sounds pretty goddamn fantastic.

    Most movellas are no doubt wonderful, but I can't get past the first few paragraphs because they're so dreary and sappy. This story is engaging from the start, and I commend you on that. Good job.
    Old Dogs Don't Eat Pomegranates
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    A short novel i have began to write. I want to see where this takes me. I know what i want to happen. All i need to do now is make it so.
    undone
    6 years ago
    Honestly, no. Some stories just end at a certain point and if it is drawn out, it begins to go downhill. What I would suggest is either getting a beta to proofread everything before you publish, or at least read your work over before publishing. There are numerous typos and grammar mistakes in this story, I'm not trying to be rude. If you want me to, I can correct the mistakes and email the whole thing back to you. I still like the story!
    undone
    6 years ago
    Oh. Wait. If you already have a story planned out for it, then sure, continue with chapters. Sorry, I just read the description.
    Riadh M.
    6 years ago
    I need to work on my grammar and spelling still it seems. I think ill work on perfecting everything before i do this again. Proof reading and stuff. Thank you for the kind words and encouragement. I'll work really hard to get it all up to snuff.
  • undone
    6 years agoReply
    Funtastical.
    Put a cover on it!
    Do you have to tag it with the V-day tag for it to be counted as an entry?
    Heheheh time to put my mush skills to use...
    Just a Dream
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    Angel believed herself to be alone; and only in her dreams could she find that one person who could make it real. *Short Story* *Contest*
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