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  • Ugo-peter
    3 years agoReply
    this is amazing, well written and entertaining. Your descriptions are vivid and give a good image of the scenes. Great work and good luck with your writing, i look forward to more.
    Soul Searcher
    Soul Searcher
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    Ever heard that the eyes are the windows to the soul? Well, for Iris Renbrook, they actually are. She can look into people's souls and see their greatest desires. Their plans for life. Their innermost...
  • Ugo-peter
    3 years agoReply
    1 Like
    This is amazing, great plot. Your descriptions are wonderful with a touch of imagination, stimulating the mind to get a better image of your scenes. Great work and good luck with your writing, i look forward to more.
    Touch
    Touch
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    Abigail comes from a line of 'witches', she uses her power to help others. But that has all ended, now that he is after her powers, she doesn't know who he is, why he wants them, but he will have them,...
    e.d.e peplow
    3 years ago
    Thank you so much!!!!
  • Ugo-peter
    3 years agoReply
    This is beautiful, a great piece of fantasy fiction. I must commend you on your descriptions, they are vivid and stimulate the imagination to get a better image of the scenes. Great work with the characterization, Emmeline bring so much life to the story. Though, i must advise that you review to make corrections of a few grammatical errors.
    Great work and good luck with your writing. I look forward to more.
    Liquidum
    Liquidum
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    “I’m not afraid of her, I’m afraid of what’s going to happen to her if she finds out about who -and what- she is."
  • Ugo-peter
    3 years agoReply
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    This is a great story, beautiful characters and vivid descriptions. I just started reading and hoping you will post more chapters. Good luck.
    Amelia
    Amelia
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    All Amelia did was skip school and now a world she never knew existed are baying for her blood.
    Natalie Sawyer
    3 years ago
    Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :).
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