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    6 months agoReply
    The ending of the first chapter really leaves a lot to think about. So far, so good. Looking forward to seeing how this turns out!
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    Death was not what i expected, though things usually never are, time and time again things change, so do people. My life was full of misery and pain, but then I met them, but I lost everything all...
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    mumbled "Review Store Open!"

    6 months agoReply
    Hello everyone, we consist of several people that hopes to help the community! We have opened a review store, along with a special twist that we think might make it enjoyable for most of you in the process of learning how to improve your writing. A Cover and Lore Store is in the making as well, and we are more than happy to accept people willing to co-author our Cover Store!

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  • Friend
    6 months agoReply
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    You have a very impressive way of writing. You have the reader asking themselves, is this story truly a mystery to the author as well? Seeing as this is a Non-Fiction, I can see it being the case. Life, as you seem to be describing it, is not written in a book for us to read. We simply wait and catch the words as they go.

    Very in love with this piece, RJDavis.
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    I heard the music of the "first dance" start up and glanced toward the dance floor only to find Kyler watching over Mary's shoulder as I started to pull my keys from my purse. The look on his face was...
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    6 months agoReply
    The start of this is alright. I would recommend adding commas and periods so the piece isn't that difficult to follow. Otherwise, good job. <3
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    hey im sarah im a tomboy i live with my boyfriend my sled dogs and my jumping and racing horses also my sheep and my cow life can have good times and bad times well this is my life
    puppydog
    6 months ago
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    thanks for the advise im a new whriter and it's kinda hard to whrite but thanks alot for the advise ��
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