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    5 years agoReply
    I like the way the tree is personified in such a way that you feel sympathy towards it. Like some others have mentioned sometimes the flow doesn't fit as well as it could but I think the originality and creativity offsets this. Liked ad fav'd
    Stuck in the middle
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    A poem from the point of view from a tree in a war ground and what it see's. This is a competition entry so please like, fav and comment :)
  • thirteen
    5 years agoReply
    I really like the vocabulary you used, it gives you a real sense of the environment and makes it seem almost poetic.
    The Huntress
    The Huntress
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    This story is set in a different world called Azure - a world of the most unique creatures from mermaids to unicorns to dragons to another species you must have never heard of - The Hunters. They are an...
    Chetna
    5 years ago
    Thank you :D
  • thirteen
    5 years agoReply
    thank you! I've moved it to non-fiction :) I must have skipped over that category, I was to busy looking for tutorial.
    How to make cupcakes
    How to make cupcak...
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    a simple guide on how to make the perfect cupcakes!
  • thirteen
    5 years agoReply
    this is great :D Tom-Zeus is a really likeable character, which makes me want to read on and hear more about him. The style of the writing , although sometimes hard to keep up with, is really good and makes the it believable and quirky. I also really like some of the phrasing and vocabulary choices as they give you an impression of Tom-Zeus' character liked and fav'd I'll probably be reading the rest of your works now :)
    Invisible Me
    Invisible Me
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    CURRENTLY EDITING. My name is Tom-Zeus. Yeah, really, it is. Nine summers ago, my family moved from the paradise of Brussels, France, to the wild city jungle of London, where they settled down and dedicated...
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