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  • TheMonsterInsideMyHead
    Okay so you asked me to read this and I will uphold my deal of reading it.
    So, first thing is first. I know that it is hard to catch all of your mistakes because sometimes I don't catch all of mine. Anyway, always try to proof read your writing once you finish the chapter. I read the sneak peak, the prologue and by the time I got to the first chapter I couldn't read anymore. There are a lot of grammatical errors and simple spelling errors. I just highly suggest you proof read your chapters before you post them. Like I said, I know I don't catch all of my mistakes but I try to catch them. Once you edit these chapters if you would like I can reread them, only if you like.
    The last thing I want to say is your story line is really good and I know you can take this story to the next level if you just proof read and extend your chapters just a bit longer.
    Demons |H.S| (ON HOLD)
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    You don't know me, And you don't want to. So don't give me a reason, To unleash my demons. Do you ever get a feeling some is-watching you? Eyeing your every move. Someone who knows everything...
    Madison074
    3 years ago
    I am looking for a editor.. Do you know anyone who can do that!
    TheMonsterInsideMyHead
    Um, the only person I really talk to on here is @[MoFlow7] so you could ask her because she writes some great stuff! I would edit for you but I can barely write my own stories right now. I am hoping I can keep writing but it's not a guarantee.
  • TheMonsterInsideMyHead
    I really love this story!
    Maria and Louis are the perfect couple! And I love that Maria is willing to fight to make their relationship work despite the obstacles. And yeah, she could give up and just go be with Reid who will always be there but she wants Louis to risk everything
    Distance Can't Change Us (Louis Tomlinson Fanfic)
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    Sequel to Coincidental Meeting :) - You don't have to read the first one but it is suggested! See what happens when Maria and Louis are miles apart. Louis is off on tour and Maria is at college studying....
    MoFlow7
    3 years ago
    Aww thanks :) I really love hearing from people that they enjoy the story. I am glad that you like it and actually read it all in depth. It means a lot to me.
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