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I'm writing a novella at the minute called "Erase and Replace" I'd really appreciate it if you take a look at it for me and tell me what you think. Thank you :D x

  • The Blue Eyed Girl
    I really like this and I love the character Evie. I'm from Wales too so like it that little bit more as well;)
    Sandystone
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    Evie loves Sandystone; its where she's gone to celebrate anything of importance since she was little. But Evie is going away to Spain and she's at Sandystone for the last time, for a very long time. Just...
    Robs
    5 years ago
    Haha thanks, I'm so glad:) Nice! Where in Wales are you from?
    B. Anonymous
    5 years ago
    Yeah, the Wales bit is a real plus, though I really enjoyed the story and the characters. Your writing style is distinctive and grips the reader, even in some of the less exciting bits and I thoroughly look forward to reading more. Please keep it up :-)
    Robs
    5 years ago
    Haha! thank you:')!
  • The Blue Eyed Girl
    Could anyone please take a look at the first chapter of my story "Erase and Replace" I know it may be a bit long but I'd really appreciate it if you could give me your opinion :)
  • The Blue Eyed Girl
    I really like this and I can't wait for you to write more! :D
    The Chosen
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    When Rebecca, an 12-year-old girl, gets an invitation to an all-boys school, all she wants to do is try to fit in. However, she finds something out about herself that she didn't know before, something...
    Sparrow3183
    5 years ago
    Thanks! Any ideas for improvement?
  • The Blue Eyed Girl

    mumbled "Decisions, decisions"

    When I was younger I would write short stories a lot of the time to let my creativity flow. I used to take great pride in them but as I have grown older, I've started to loose interest. I don't want such a big part of me to disappear so horribly so I have decided to join this website and start writing again. I'm a little stuck on what to do, though. Decisions, decisions.
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