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  • tawny_owl
    5 years agoReply
    Fantastic second chapter! Love how we will see how this relationship develops whilst knowing there will be a breakdown. Excited to see what will happen next.
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    When a heart breaks, the cut is never clean. We can only hope the scars heal and love overcomes all eventually.
    Rih Could
    5 years ago
    Thank you - stay tuned but it may be a while...!!
  • tawny_owl
    5 years agoReply
    Love the images you have incorporated into the most recent chapter. So glad Becky is still on his mind - loving the complexity of Tom's character.
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    If Tom is to get what he wants, he must first figure out who 'he' really is, and what it is that he's been looking for.
    Archi_Leach
    5 years ago
    She'll be back; I know how much you like her, Tawny Owl! Loving the display picture by the way.
  • tawny_owl
    5 years agoReply
    A fantastic opening to your story. Your writing is so engaging and interesting. Such clear and intriguing atmosphere built up. I love the images you are developing - they seem to be metaphorical of the nature of your characters and their relationship.

    I'm hooked - looking forward to the next installment!
    Reconstruction
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    When a heart breaks, the cut is never clean. We can only hope the scars heal and love overcomes all eventually.
    Rih Could
    5 years ago
    Thanks tawny_owl that was exactly the style I was going for - I am nearly finished writing the next chapter so please keep your eyes peeled and let me know what you think!
  • tawny_owl
    5 years agoReply
    Just been totally captivated by the first seven chapters of this story! I love the way Tom's character is developing, particularly the end of chapter seven. I am so excited to see where this character is going - I feel like I am beginning to see chinks of who 'he' really is, looking forward to watching him discover himself too. Keep Becky!! A key character I think!

    Keep writing, I'm waiting!
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    If Tom is to get what he wants, he must first figure out who 'he' really is, and what it is that he's been looking for.
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