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Hey, Internet, I'm the Tailyst! I'm an author-in-training (although, I think most people here are too...) who just hopes to use this website for feedback, since I tell my friends too much about my story, especially the plot twists. Fantasy's my main hideout, even though I have no idea why I do, but I do write other stuff from time to time. So, if you're still reading this, I hope you enjoy my stuff and have a nice day!
I like quite a lot of Nintendo video game franchises, and I also like reading (though most people who write usually read...). Don't expect me to talk much about movies, though, since I barely watch them unless they're related to video games and not entirely horrible. :)

  • Tailyst

    mumbled "More Updates"

    8 months agoReply
    Hey, everyone!

    I entered the Historical Fiction completion, with less than a day until the deadline! This will be my first competition, and I thought I'd mention my entry. :) My story is about Japanese history.

    On another note, I said I would publish a re-write of The Invisible at the beginning of April. However, I haven't. Hopefully it'll be up soon, when I'll probably update it weekly or fortnightly. Sorry about the wait.

    Thanks!

    Have a good day or night, and good luck to everyone else entering the Historical Fiction competition!
    Willow Angel
    8 months ago
    Good luck!!! :D
    Elijah Hael
    8 months ago
    Good luck!
    Tailyst
    8 months ago
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    Thanks! :)
  • Tailyst

    mumbled "Update: The Invisible"

    8 months agoReply
    Hey, Internet!

    Some time back, I posted a story here named 'The Invisible'. However, because of my issues with the opening chapters, I have revised it. :) I'm happy with the new draft, and I hope to have it up by the beginning of April.

    The majority of the plot is unchanged - it's mostly the opening (which is actually all I posted on here... :( ) and some changes to characters and their relationships.

    As with all my stories, I'm open to feedback once I post it. :)

    But, anyway, good day (or night)! :)
    SnowPotato_
    8 months ago
    Wow! That's so jolly cool :D :D

    Good luck!

    ~Snow
    Tailyst
    8 months ago
    Thank you! Looks like I didn't get it up on when I wanted to, but hopefully I'll have the rewrite up soon.
  • Tailyst

    mumbled "Pokémon Sun and Moon!"

    1 years agoReply
    1 Like
    It's nearly time! It's nearly time! Pokémon Sun and Moon is COMING! A week remains! :D It looks so cool, yet different, yet still Pokémon! That just makes it more awesome. :)

    Random Question: If you're getting Pokémon Sun and Moon, what version are you getting? I'd like to get Pokémon Sun. :D
    Tailyst
    1 years ago
    :) Pokémon's great, in both the anime and the games. :D I recommend the games, though. They're cool. :)
    SnowPotato_
    1 years ago
    If I get the time, I will definitely get a couple of games :D :D
    Tailyst
    1 years ago
    Coolio! :)
  • Tailyst
    1 years agoReply
    Hey, here's the review:
    This is great! Only one chapter in, and there's just so much character development for both Lethia and Celeste (both cool names, by the way). But that ending... that can be a risky move, since you're basically telling the reader one of the main protagonists (at least, that's what I'm assuming Celeste is) is going to die by the end of the book - but it's done so well it creates suspense and shock rather than just giving it away. Great work there! :) The relationship between them is quite good too - very realistic and developed.

    I don't see much that needs improving, but I did notice a few typos here and there, but not too many. Overall, I'm looking forward to seeing more of this! It's great so far, and I hope you continue it. :)
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    "As I sat there, clothed in the brightest yellow dress I could find, I thought of her. Celeste'd always say it was about persepctive. That's what she said whenever something bad would happen, whether it...
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