FemaleAustraliaMember since 19 Mar 13Age 22Last online 4 years ago

Looking for lots of feedback of any kind. = )
Like seriously. I want critical feedback. If you're in a bad mood and want some relief, read my work and comment.
I want to improve. ; )

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  • Star Warped!!! Episode One: The Fanta Menace
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  • The Fearless Cavaliers
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  • Yes Minister - The Mean Situation - Australian Version
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  • SVHOOD
    4 years agoReply
    Lol, these are hilarious = )
    You, Me, and the Facts
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    You, Me, and the Facts is a book of random facts that isn't just updated every week, but almost every day! Discover random but cool facts and detailed explanation about all kinds of topics!
  • SVHOOD
    4 years agoReply
    completely brilliant. Everything is true to reality, and the phrase 'delete the history' has been used exceptionally well.
    This is the kind of thing I won't forget in a hurry. Not sure why. :)
    Delete The History
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    Did you remember to delete your history?
  • SVHOOD
    4 years agoReply
    An interesting look at American culture!
    Just perhaps a little bit of contradiction (which is the risk with rants like these).... Definitely do look for your own answers in life, but don't automatically assume that the church and the previous generation don't have anything to offer. After all, that's not open-mindedness.
    Keep your mind open, and your brain ON. (Which it sounds like you are doing).
    Mindless rants are fantastic ways of keeping the mind switched on. I wish more people would do them.
    And graffiti is SO an art.
    You have an awesome writing style, obviously meant to be persuasive. Keep up the great work.
    The Art Of Today
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    A pointless, mindless rant from an immature teenager. Enjoy.
  • SVHOOD
    4 years agoReply
    You should definitely keep going with this story. I feel like you have a brilliant plot in store for it :)
    Admittedly it's a little difficult to understand, but that's only because the grammar and punctuation is a little hazy. I feel like I'm not one to talk. ;) Also not sure if the use of 'mother she has not really took a side' was meant to be characteristic of Bernadette's speech or not.
    Very good with the descriptions.
    Train Destination,
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    1940, the crisis of the war, the rage of the citizens. Brother and Sister, split apart my a Train Destination, Bernadette and Lawrence. Bernadette left, stranded with stern Mrs. Ann and the owner who before,...
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