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Susan grew up in Europe and lived in a few European and Middle-Eastern countries before moving to California, now her jumping board to the rest of the world.

  • Susan N.
    5 years agoReply
    A very humorous and refreshing take on the topic. It feels however that the end falls a little short. One would want a reversal or two before the end or a conclusion that is less anticipated. I like your very fluid style and the pace you set.
    A Fashion Freakout
    A Fashion Freakout
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    Rebecca is pretty and popular and she's had her eye on the Annis crystal platforms for the last few weeks. Monique has also had her eye on these particular pair of shoes. Watch them kick and claw at each...
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    Thank you for feedback!
  • Susan N.
    5 years agoReply
    Your style flows naturally in a well crafted story. I'm looking forward to reading more...
    Before I Die
    Before I Die
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    This is my entry for the 'love' competition for Valentine's Day. Lexa suffers with terminal cancer. She knows she hasn't got long to live. She has no one to live for anyway. She is left spell-bound...
  • Susan N.
    5 years agoReply
    There is a lot of energy and the rhythm works really well. I like the creativity of it, but there are a lot of typos/spelling errors (e.g. mum vs. mom, irresisitable vs. irresistible, etc) that negate all the talent that transpires in this work.
    Deadly Secret
    Deadly Secret
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    My name is Tayla Brook. Everyone is scared of something, right? You'd expect a sixteen-year-old, like myself, to be fearless, afraid of nothing. But you're wrong. My heart aches with betrayal. This...
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    Don't worry haha! Would you mind reading two of my movellas? Before I Die and A Fashion Freakout?
    I'd love some feedback!
    Susan N.
    5 years ago
    Will gladly do. Have a look at my work (I'm craving for feedback too!)
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    Yeah sure + thank you!! :D
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