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  • Sursagar

    mumbled "a ride home"

    4 years agoReply
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    Don't know why I'm writing but..
    As my mom picked me up from school I realised that the ride back was exactly like life.
    First I walked with my classmates out of the classroom. Next with my chums till the school gate. Finally my friends left me and I was with my Mom andBro or in short family. Next I dropped down from the car to open our house gates. It struck me I was alone and opening.. the doors of death? returning to where the journey began? In life alas one must walk alone. Don't know, I can get philosophical at times:-)))
  • Sursagar
    4 years agoReply
    loved it! I like the first person view and you have expressed things naturally so for that kudos!
    ps: i know it's damn irritating but could you comment/like my poem a golden whisper
    Lips
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    A romance.
  • Sursagar
    4 years agoReply
    thanks for fanning
    Prince on the white horse
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    Everything will be fine when I find the Prince. Everything will be fine... Fine, fine, fine...
  • Sursagar
    4 years agoReply
    hey that's a new one!
    nice storyline and i love the feeling of hanging doom. feels like robinhood again. wonderful but i guess you could take it from different perspectives like grouse,etc. wonderful and wanna see your next chapter
    ps:could you tell me sincerely how is my poem a golden whisper?
    The Raven Prince
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    “So that’s why you came back,” he mumbled, the cuts in his forehead beginning to let their drawn blood run down the side of his face. “To lure me out.” His bright blue eyes came to lock with hers, though...
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