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  • Purgatory
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  • A Collection of Poems
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  • Dear Doctor Watson
    Dear Doctor Watson
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  • Moosey
    2 years agoReply
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    Sole was a very interesting chapter. Made me wonder what kind of turn the story was going to take next!

    Cerca Trova left me wanting to know so much more! I can't wait to find out about Justin's past.

    Nice work! :)
    Bring Me That Horizon
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    Justin, jokey and singular. Lina, the girl he meets while on holiday with a knack for making his heart beat that much faster. But all hearts stop beating at some point, and with that the wild ferocity...
  • Moosey
    2 years agoReply
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    You are amazing at showing and not telling! Absolutely fantastic. The only error I see is, "Justin! It's dinner, you mother is calling you." I believe the you should be your. Can't wait to read more! <3
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    Justin, jokey and singular. Lina, the girl he meets while on holiday with a knack for making his heart beat that much faster. But all hearts stop beating at some point, and with that the wild ferocity...
    Narcy
    2 years ago
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    Thanks for that
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