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Always wanted to be a writer, specifically a screenwriter. Big time procrastinator trying to find out if my dreams are possible.

  • The Raft
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  • Scottish valentine's poem
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  • StubbA
    5 years agoReply
    I'm halfway through and I have to say I really enjoy the writing. It is a far cry from most vampire themed stories that I usually tend to avoid. Very happy I read it. The language you use is unique, a few words required a look up, 'hubris' springs to mind. I'll continue and tell you what I think once I've finished.
    Midnight
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    The elimination of evil has ever been the goal of a sinister Catholic organization, which proves to include the vampires that thrive in the dark midnight hours. Countess Geschwitz finds herself to be an...
  • StubbA

    Need some good criticism

    5 years agoReply
    Hi guys,

    I really want to start just thrashing down all my ideas on paper. My minds full of thoughts but whether they are coherent or not is something I leave to you.
    I have two pieces I have written and I've attended writing classes but you criticism, if it could be called that, was sickly sweet.
    I don't necessarily want people to just shit on me but I want to know if I'm on the write track or not.

    Thanks

    Stubba
    StubbA
    5 years ago
    I can spell just so you know haha. iPhone spell checker sometimes catches me out.

    Stu
    StubbA
    5 years ago
    Not the most active group I see. Should've looked at the other posts first.
    Bright
    5 years ago
    hey i will take a look at pieces :-)
  • StubbA
    5 years agoReply
    Would love any feedback guys :)
    The Raft
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    This is a story of two young boys from different sides of the town embarking on the last adventure of the summer while struggling to maintain a fragile friendship that is emotionally mature before its...
    3 SECOND LUKE
    5 years ago
    It was a great chapter 1 :D
    keep up your great work
    I may add your Movella to the Top 5 of the week
    check it out and help support us on Latest or my profile :D
    StubbA
    5 years ago
    Thanks for the input jess!! I just started on this and I already love it.
  • StubbA
    5 years agoReply
    Thanks Kndila. I find it hard to judge what I write so anything I upload is completely open to criticism. :)
    Scottish valentine's poem
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    This is the first poem I ever wrote for my ex for valentine's. This is my first piece I have uploaded so I would love any input anyone can give. Thanks =)
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