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Hey ladies and gents! Please feel free to read my fan fiction! I write just about everything, so if you have a topic you want me to write about, comment and I will try my best!

  • StarKite
    4 years agoReply
    I think it's pretty good. I would say one thing, if you're wanting to attracts teen readers, change the characters. The story can still be just as good with a young heroin, and it makes it more relatable. Most of the people on this website are teens anyway. I don't know how 'in depth' you want me to go on constructive criticism. If you want more, just let me know:)
    Surviving the Unknown
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    Micah is an agent for the FBI, chased by a friend turned against her. Her first case, a simple observation, turns into a mystery she must engage in order to survive. She becomes friends with new people...
    Whomever You Please
    Thanks! If there's any more advice I'd love to hear it! You've already helped a bunch!
    StarKite
    4 years ago
    Also, a love interest wouldn't hurt. It draws more people and makes the story more interesting.
  • StarKite

    Feedback please?

    4 years agoReply
    I just started a new movella, and I would really like some feedback on it. It only has 2 chapters so far, so it's short and easy. It's called 'Bitten' and I think it's pretty good, but I would really like other people to tell me if I'm missing anything, if the story makes sense...yaddy yaddy yadda. Thanks:)
    Whomever You Please
    I'll give you feedback if you'll do the same for me! Mine's called Surviving the Unknown, it's only a few chapters as well, please be BRUTALLY honest if you read it, thanks!
    Whomever You Please
    Okie dokie, I've posted the feedback under your story!
    StarKite
    4 years ago
    ThanksI I will make sure to read yours too!
  • StarKite
    4 years agoReply
    Hey girly:) Wanna start a story together? Thanks for reading:)
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    He met her on a rainy night after his Tour Bus broke down. She knew who he was, and wasn't sure she wanted to take a trip into his world. He wanted a taste of her life, so when he takes a break from the...
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