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    6 years agoReply
    Thank you for your feedback, I'm new to writing on this website and It's good to hear peoples honest opinions!
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    What happens when on valentines day, your love murders a man? What happens when he beats you until you suffer fatal concussion? Your life gets lost to love. A short story showing the desparation of a...
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    6 years agoReply
    I thought it was really moving, and it gave a sense of longing. Maybe to add something next time you could do another verse? just slightly it might have rushed through but i only sa this because I want to know more, about that cold winter and the heartbreak of war, a really lovely piece.
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    Something I wrote last year when I was fourteen as part of a school assignment on war poetry.
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