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I am a teenager. Surprise! I know absolutely nothing about 1D so don't expect any stories on them. Or at least I don't expect to. But life is full of surprises, right? <My sister, さくら❀, got me interested in this site.> I enjoy writing very much, and would greatly appreciate any and all feedback. Comments mean more to me than favoring my work. Mistakes make the world go round, so please let me know if I've made some in my writing. Now, if you do like something, be sure to let me know. I appreciate all likes and favors! If you fan me, I am likely to return the favor. :) Personally, I feel that we are a biased audience when judging ourselves. With this in mind, I'd like to let you know that I am obnoxiously sarcastic at times, tend to rant when I feel strongly about something, am an extreme nerd, and an awesome person to be around! So enjoy! :D

  • Sophia Marie
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    I like the messages in each of your poems. Though I may not generally relate to them, the messages are strong. I like the rhyme scheme in "Wishing"! :D
    Leaves of Lines [Poetry collection]
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    A compilation of my poetry ranging across the board. [I'm not depressed, by the way] So far, these are all published as separate movellas, so you can either comment here on the whole, or if you want...
    Prodigy
    3 weeks ago
    Thank you, much appreciated :)
  • Sophia Marie
    This made me genuinely grin while I read it! This is awesome! I love it!
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    Poem about how people change their views throughout life. Again, I'm HORRIBLE with these blurbs, sorry. [This is also included in my "Leaves of Lines" compilation]
    Sophia Marie
    3 weeks ago
    If it wouldn't be too much to ask, could you maybe take a look at my story "Purgatory"? It's a work in progress so I would really appreciate any feedback.
    Prodigy
    3 weeks ago
    Of course :) I don't have time at the moment, but I'll try to do it tomorrow. Feel free to bug me until I do ;)
    Sophia Marie
    3 weeks ago
    It's fine. :) Whenever you get around to it, you get around to it.
  • Sophia Marie
    6 months agoReply
    This is awesome! I really love the texture and folding you did with the fabric in her hand! I'm working on that myself, since it is a really difficult skill for me to learn. Well done!
    Alternate Divergent Cover!
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    My entry for the Divergent contest :D For my cover i chose to illustrate the scene where Tris discards her Abnegation robes, about to jump from the roof and join Dauntless. I realise that there are supposed...
    TheFuzz ϟ
    6 months ago
    Thank you very much :D I'm sure you'll get it soon, and once you do it's easy peasy :)
  • Sophia Marie
    6 months agoReply
    This is awesome! I can't wait to read more! :)
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    Par-a-dis-i-ac : A place of ideal beauty or loveliness. Fai-ry-ta-le : A magical or idealized children's story. And that's when it all goes wrong. A story by Heartaunter, Mirlotta and Delilah Arende....
    Mirlotta
    6 months ago
    Thank you :)
  • Sophia Marie
    8 months agoReply
    WOw this is powerful. I don't know what else to say; I'm speechless. I love it.
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    The you I remember Is old, perished, as good as dust For you've passed through the portal Leaving me trapped in the despair of the past Poetry copyright dramaticllama 2014
    dramaticllama Nightshade
    Thank you! That made my day!
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