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  • Snowmelody

    [Adventure] The 7 Deadly Sins: Wrath

    3 months agoReply
    The 7 Deadly Sins: WrathEvery human is happy since the first time he sets a foot into this world, the only thing that can destroy this happiness are the 7 deadly sins. It's totall...


    "Every human is happy since the first time he sets a foot into this world, the only thing that can destroy this happiness are the 7 deadly sins. It's totally irrelevant if you're the one that sins or someone ight Novel Styleelse. Let's say a women is committing a sin of wrath in killing her husband, both fall into despair, despite the non sinning of the man. This story is about a pure boy who's life changes because of the influence of the 7 deadly sins. His name is Erwin."

    I hope that readers can take away this from the novel: "That one problem I once had could be the fault of a different person sinning, and I wasn't the one at fault." I really needed someone to tell me that as a child because my mother has anger issues. But if I see it like: "Oh, shes falling for one of the 7 deadly sins." then it doesn't feels like it's my fault. The message I want to convey in the final book:

    "Stay away from people who's bad decisions start to effect your life and make you miserable as well."

    That's the theme but in general it's a Hero Journeys story an adventure that follows the main character Erwin as he himself becomes changed because of the influence of the 7.

    Written in Light Novel Style!

    If Wrath is liked I plan to do sequel books that focus on the different other deadly sins.

    Tell me what you think so far and have fun!
  • Snowmelody

    "The 7 Deadly Sins: Wrath" CC

    3 months agoReply
    The 7 Deadly Sins: WrathEvery human is happy since the first time he sets a foot into this world, the only thing that can destroy this happiness are the 7 deadly sins. It's totall...


    I'm looking for CC:

    - Grammar (Keep in mind this is a Light Novel, so just English grammar not novel grammar.)
    - Characters
    - Engaging?
    - Can you easily imagine what the monster "Blue String" in chapter 2 looks like?
    - Anything you really disliked? (Except it being wrote in Light Novel style)
    - Anything you really liked?

    Please read Chapter 1 & 2. Chapter 1 is more on the slower side.
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