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  • SmoothCriminal001
    I've just now started reading this story. It looks good. Do you want to be a good writer? I mean, seriously good? If yes, there are a few things you need to take care of. One of the most basic things in fiction writing is that you have to stick to a tense. In this writing, the protaginist's perspective wavers between past and present. In addition, you need to work a little on ur grammar. Apart from these, your narration is brilliant. You have the potential. Keep writing!!!
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    When her pack goes missing suspiciously, fearing for the her safety she is sent off with her brother to a new place, for a new start, a new life. She thinks that by running away, she will be safe. Wrong....
  • SmoothCriminal001
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    A few grammatical errors. Other than that, a good read. Looking forward for update :)
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    delicate
    2 years ago
    hey! thank you for this. next time i should check for my mistakes before publishing. (-:
  • SmoothCriminal001

    mumbled "Need reviews for my novel!!!"

    Hi buddies.. My novel for your views.. Again ;)

    Nick of TimeWhat if a group of friends happen to open Pandora's box and are forced to close it down before things have gone too nasty? What if things going too nasty...
  • SmoothCriminal001
    I just started ur story and it looks okay. But I get this feeling you've written in a rush to catch some train or something!! Slow down and make your characters take the stage.

    Also, in original Potter series, Hermione does not know of Luna until their 5th year. If you did not want to stick with it, fine. But if you wish this to be a prompt fanfic, I suggest you obey the original story that has already been written.. Good work, though :)
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    This is a story about Draco and Hermione in their third year. I hope you like it! THIS IS A DRAMIONE. Do not read if you don't ship. Please like, favour and/or comment!
  • SmoothCriminal001
    I liked your dialogues and narration. Waiting for more :)
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    delicate
    2 years ago
    that means a whole lot, thank you.
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