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  • sL0riss
    4 years agoReply
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    Again, another piece of beautiful writing! After having read this I think that it's actually better how you've done it- more of one off stories rather than one long story. I am really fascinated by your writing and I would love to see more :-)
    Life's Lament
    Life's Lament
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  • sL0riss
    4 years agoReply
    This is beautiful writing, I really love the way that you've expressed the positives and negatives of Life and Death and how you've created the characters in depth in such a concise piece. I would love to find out the background to this girl and how she gets to meet Life and Death and make her decision... In my mind she has tried committing suicide and is choosing whether she will go ahead with it or be saved. It's brilliant that you've left it open to interpretation but I'm very curious to the background of this story :-) beautiful piece, well done
    Ebony and Ivory
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  • sL0riss
    5 years agoReply
    haha I enjoyed reading this, thanks for the advice! I've taken a lot out of this movella and hopefully I'll be able to improve on mine even more, thank you :-)
    Eat My Word Splurge
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    If you read nothing else on this site, you must read this. It may save you from committing ritual suicide in front of your family. NOTE: Formerly known as "Hot to Write a Story That Doesn't Suck" and...
  • sL0riss

    mumbled "Contemplation..."

    5 years agoReply
    I think I'm going to publish a story I did for a competition last year on here... I don't think it's got a title yet but it's about a girl who has motor neuron disease and is trying to win the right to commit suicide legally... I do have such a pleasant mind!
    LoveMeBabe
    5 years ago
    Post it,that's a good idea.
    If you like romantic stories,you may like mine,i hope you will like it,i'm sorry if you don't like the main character but.. your imagine is the reader,so it can do anything with it.
  • sL0riss
    5 years agoReply
    As I was reading this I was reminded of Angus, Thongs and Perfect Snogging - This is great! I love stuff like this, well done, it's a great start - I'm looking forward to reading more!
    My Near Invisible Life
    My Near Invisible...
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    "You're crazy," I mutter to Jess, slumping down on a cushion next to her bed. "Naa, just wait for him," she laughs, rolling off of her bed, onto the floor next to me. "But all of his friends will...
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