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  • SKnight8046
    1 years agoReply
    Ahh, so you have learnt the art of killing off the love interest. Gooooood........ gooooooooooooooooood....... >:D

    But in all seriousness, I thought this was really good, particularly with how confused he seems after the attack and how his first thoughts turn to Priss and it all seems so lovely and then suddenly it just goes so grim. :D Also, your representation of Death is really nice as an attractive sort, makes her rather creepy rather than imposing. :) Now to read the other one and compare!
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    As the last survivor of The Free City, now turned to ashes by the masters of men, the Dragons, Haytham is but a naive boy thrust into a world of vengeance, suffering and hopelessness. Now bonded to the...
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