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  • The Triwizarding Games
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  • siian93
    4 years agoReply
    Hey guys I don't know of anyone out there is actually reading this but if you are can you give me some sort of sign a like, a comment whatever. I feel a little silly writing if no one is really interested. I know it's not about that its about writing something you enjoy but I would also like for people to enjoy my story the way I enjoy some of the other really great stories people have written and I'd like to find a balance between so if this story isn't great I'll try my luck at another one lol. Thanks
    The Triwizarding Games
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    When Professor Snow, Principal of Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry, announces the return of the Triwizarding tournament after 100 years with some slight adjustments, the students all hope for...
  • siian93
    4 years agoReply
    You asked for some constructive criticism, most of flows well it's very addictive however there is one sentence that bothers me about Raven looking back after hight school and realising she is much prettier that Maria and the other one. I just find it a little awkward because the whole story is in the present except for that and that idea is covered in the next chapter. But other than that great work. Keep it up :)
    The Other Side of the Story
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    The normal high school student, Raven, needs to analyse the famous fairy tale of Snow White. Thinking this as easy, she soon uncovers the truth about the perfect Snow White, and realizes it is much deeper,...
    Bells Hunter
    4 years ago
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    Yes, thank you! I'll change that... do you remember when it is written? Like which chapter?
    But thanks so much :)
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