FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 2 Jun 12Age 20Last online 3 years ago

Writing is who I am.

  • Shine Among Darkness
    This is really good! It really makes the reader empathise with the character by describing her as isolated and judged by others. Love it!

    Stay happy.
    Spread Your Wings
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    Jade is an outcast. She's never really fitted in and she's constantly teased about everything - from her taste in music, to her fashion sense. One day after a terrible day at school, full of abuse and...
    H. E. Sheehan
    4 years ago
    Thank you for the feedback! :) x
  • Shine Among Darkness
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    I can't even give any constructive criticism! It's so creative!
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    A promise was made to Hades; a promise that couldn’t not be broken even if wanted. The parents of Kore promised Hades that when she would be born; she would be born his lover. At only 18, Kore’s parents...
    J.K. Panesar
    4 years ago
    thanks again.
  • Shine Among Darkness
    LOVE IT! Oh my gosh, wow!
    Pomegranate
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    A promise was made to Hades; a promise that couldn’t not be broken even if wanted. The parents of Kore promised Hades that when she would be born; she would be born his lover. At only 18, Kore’s parents...
  • Shine Among Darkness
    I love it! The font is quite difficult to read though (it might just be me preferring Arial though :P) x
    Am I his princess?
    Am I his princess?
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    A young girl has been tortured by life. Her parents died when she was really young and her uncle beats her. You think her life gets better once she meets Niall Horan but could it have gotten worse? All...
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