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  • SettingFireToTheRain
    It was okay, the vocabulary could be improved to enhance the story, and the length also could be increased. Good plot though, just write a bit more.
    Don't change
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    I was tired of being the geek, the loner, the fat one. I wanted more than one friend. I wanted to be popular, pretty, sexy. So I got a makeover..
    Peace & Donuts
    5 years ago
    Kk, I will try and improve my vocab, and dw this is only about a 1/4 of te way thro!!!! Thanks for reading :)
  • SettingFireToTheRain
    That was brilliant! I really enjoyed reading it:)
    Perfection.
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    This is my entry for the fashion competition. I chose to do the model storyline. I listened to Hallelujah by Rufus Wainwright when writing this. Please comment and click like if you like it!
    Em :)
    5 years ago
    thank you <3
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