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  • Serafina
    5 years agoReply
    This poem seems a little bit awkward but I dunno, it also kind of fits. It feels like you are getting caught up in the rage that the person writing this poem is feeling. I quite like it :)
    If you get the time could you check out my newest movella "Oliver James: enlightenment" I would love some feedback :)
    Murderous desires
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    Well what the poem is about is kind of obvious yet i mention again... its a poem on killing urges that one gets...
  • Serafina
    5 years agoReply
    I love this! It's really beautiful and serene and just gives you this air of calm. I feel like you've really captured whatever the images in your mind were. This is just lovely!
    If you get the time could you check out my newest movella "Oliver James: enlightenment" I would love some feedback :)
    Aphrodite's Brow
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    A poem about love never found. Inspired by two days ago when I was sat alone in the most beautiful spot in the fading light of a spring day and these images started flashing through my mind...
  • Serafina
    5 years agoReply
    This is a nice story that has good potential. Are you going to write anymore? I think maybe you should expand a nit more because the plot is great but it moves really fast and jumps around a lot. Overall I really enjoyed it! :) If you get the time could you check out my newest movella "Oliver James: enlightenment" I would love some feedback :)
    Along The Snow
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    I dont know what to say really but my english assesment was to write a detective story so I thought might as well publish it.
    Bran
    5 years ago
    THNX EVER SO MUCH HAVE BEEN ON THIS FOR LONG CAN U READ MY NEW POEM U MIGHT ENJOY IT
  • Serafina
    5 years agoReply
    I really like this! I would love to hear more. Like Peace & Donuts said, there are a few mistakes but on a whole it was really nice :) Well done!
    If you get the time could you check out my newest movella "Oliver James: enlightenment" I would love some feedback :)
    Grandma Jo
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    My Grandma has always been a fantastic story teller but in the Anderson shelter I found out that they were more than just stories...
  • Serafina
    5 years agoReply
    I think Alix (movellas.com/people/profile/201205242018.. should be on here. She's an amazing writer and was featured on the movellas blog.
    Highlighted Authors
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    There are so many authors on Movellas who deserve more reconition. Highlighted Authors is the best place to find all that information! Elizabeth Hale, Lia-Loves-Cookies, and Cecilia Swan will review some...
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