FemaleMember since 23 Dec 12Last online 4 years ago

I am a young woman who loves writing, reading and drawing. I have an avid interest in criminal psychology and in the darker aspects of human nature. My first movella on here is Devil with the Angel's Eyes, a Kite Runner fanfiction that centers around my OC, Saria, Assef's younger sister. If anyone has any feedback or comments please don't hesitate to let me know. I welcome all criticisms.

If anyone would like me to read and critique their work just drop me a line and I'll see what I can do. I'm not the greatest at giving concrit but I will try to help you guys out as much as I can. :)

  • SariaAdelah
    5 years agoReply
    I can really relate to some of the issues raised here, especially the bullying. I was bullied in school (not physical, but got ignored by people who were supposed to be my friends)
    Thank you for posting this, I can tell it will really help me. Sky is lucky to have such a great friend. :hug:
    I'm a mess, help recovery guide
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    his is a guide which were writing to explain the background of things in life and advice on how to deal with that. Suggest chapter to us if you need help with anything :)
    RAClarke
    5 years ago
    Aha thank you so much from me and Sky :')
  • SariaAdelah
    5 years agoReply
    This is very well-written, and an interesting take on the usual 1D fanfictions out there. A few grammar mistakes but they aren't that noticeable. Really great work. I can't wait for the new chapters. :)
    Thank you so much for favouriting my story as well. It means a LOT to me.
    My Angel
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    I hurt all over. The fall could have killed me but it didn't. I got lucky. This time. Is this what other angels had to go through to get their wings. I knew I had a mission. Teach someone to love. But...
  • SariaAdelah
    5 years agoReply
    Cracking up. I love this. :D
    how to write the best 1D fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    omg u guys its liek really easy just followmy steps and u'll get tons of likes and followers cover foto is 1D harry styles hes so sexie omg. This is a parody of 1D fan fictions. Also, if you find...
    sakura❀
    5 years ago
    Hahaha thanks :D
  • SariaAdelah
    5 years agoReply
    I'm not a huge fan of One Direction (although I must admit some of their songs can be quite catchy) but I think your story is very well written and has great characterisation. I'm looking forward to more from you.
    My Brother Harry Styles (Sequel to Family Secret)
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    This is the life of Victoria kelly how her life got turned around after she found out she was the sister of one of the most famous people out there the one and only... Harry Styles. This is the sequel...
  • SariaAdelah
    5 years agoReply
    I think this is a fantastic story. I love murder stories, and was looking for the perfect one. I think I've found it. You have a real talent. If you have the time, would you mind taking a quick look at my Kite Runner fanfiction? It's told from the point of view of my OC, Saria, Assef's 12 year old sociopath sister. Well done again, I'm off to read your next piece of work.
    An Easy Kill
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    Have you ever wondered what goes though the mind of a man who is capable of taking the life of another human being; somebody innocent, old and frail. Have you ever wondered why or how they think or perhaps...
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