FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 16 Jun 12Last online 1 years ago

Well hi, I'm Sarah and I like reading and writing;-)

For my movellas 'Spies must tell lies' and 'Identity Unknown', I have borrowed characters from the Gallagher Girls series by Ally Carter. These characters are not my own creation - I just wanted to continue a great series that has ended.

  • SarahSwan
    4 years agoReply
    1 Like
    I really really like this! Your characters are so well described (I think Jenna in particular is clear to imagine) and I like the pace - it's detailed but still moving as a story. I hope you keep writing, it'll be fantastic! :)
    May's Cherry Tree
    May's Cherry Tree
    4
    911
    6
    There was a girl once. She had loose ringlets and dark, brown eyes. She wanted to be noticed, but no one ever let her. And when she tried to change and be noticed, she disappeared.
    Rachael P
    4 years ago
    Thank you very much! This is my third time writing 'May's Cherry Tree', but I feel it's improved. Thanks again :)
  • SarahSwan
    4 years agoReply
    This is such a good start! There's suspense and really great description - I'd suggest adding a little more in places just to really set the scene. I look forward to reading more :)
    Eyes of Emerald
    Eyes of Emerald
    12
    484
    12
    “The thing on top of Keira got up, slowly, and stood smaller than I thought. It stood on four legs, like a dog, and growled like a wolf. I swore under my breath as it leaped at me, claws extended, and...
    Cat Mai
    4 years ago
    thank you! I'll try and improve on those points for the chapters to come! :)
    SarahSwan
    4 years ago
    1 Like
    no problem!
  • SarahSwan
    4 years agoReply
    It's so nice to read a fanfiction that a) isn't about one direction and b) is a really detailed piece of writing. I love your style and hope you win this for the Doctor Who fandom! :)
    Little Lillian
    Little Lillian
    8
    1365
    20
    Lillian was eleven when she first met the doctor. The tardis stole her like she stole him, but she did more than that, in the end, she saved her.
    SarahSwan
    4 years ago
    if you have time i'd really appreciate it :)
    A.C.Martins
    4 years ago
    It's seriously really good!! Good luck with your competition :D
    SarahSwan
    4 years ago
    1 Like
    thank you so much! :)
  • SarahSwan
    4 years agoReply
    I was scared reading this:o great description, from a great fandom!!
    Cyber
    Cyber
    14
    1514
    23
    The Cybermen have taken over. The Doctor has fallen. Hope is lost. But one girl believes that she could maybe, just maybe, manage to do the impossible, and try to fight back against the menace. A One-shot...
    Pochapal
    4 years ago
    Thanks! :D

    Although, I'm not all familiar with the fandom, to be honest. ^^;;
    SarahSwan
    4 years ago
    ah, you should definitely join us in the who fandom, it's epic :3
  • SarahSwan
    4 years agoReply
    Your description is so powerful and brilliant. You really have a great chance of winning this :)
    Ice Glass Beads
    Ice Glass Beads
    11
    1520
    17
    Marilyn Opal. Even the name sounds beautiful. The mystery woman, they call her. But they don't know what goes on behind locked doors and fences, where secrets and betrayal are thick underfoot, and broken...
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