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  • Sarahmara

    Some feedback?

    5 years agoReply
    I'm hoping to enter the two poems I have written to a poetry contest for school so if anyone would take a look at my poems "A Simple Act" and "Cobra Kisses" and let me know what you think or how I can improve it, it would be awesome!
    pigeon
    4 years ago
    Hi,
    It may be a bit late but I read your poems and they are really good! If you were looking to improve them I would suggest making the meaning in Cobra Kisses a bit clearer- personally, I don't think you get the message across strongly enough. Maybe introduce it more in the beginning just so the reader gets a clearer sense about what it's about?
  • Sarahmara

    mumbled "new to this..."

    5 years agoReply
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    Hi! I just uploaded my first few poems on this site and it would be awesome if you checked them out and maybe gave some feedback. I'll gladly check out some of your poetry too!
    poeticchances
    5 years ago
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    Your poems are amazing! They're really unique and have such strong and creative ideas, and they flow really well!
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