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  • SarahG
    4 years agoReply
    Well, you could right a pov on both characters on how they are feeling. For Harry, you could right about the regret and anger he holds on himself. For Quinn, it could be shocked and physical and emotional pain. Then you could like say how Harry starts to drink his dads alcohol to cover the regret feeling and make him temporarily forget although he only drinks a little so he is tipsy, then he goes to her house and knocks on her door. Quinn's brother could answer it and then Harry remembers that he was the reason that Quinn and himself started an argument because if Quinn wasn't almost raped by him then Harry wouldn't have said what he said and grabbed her. If he wasn't angry he wouldn't have done anything. So Harry starts arguing with the brother and then it starts a fight and Quinn comes down from her room with red puffy eyes hearing the noise and grabs Harry's shirts trying to pull him off her brother which results in his shirt ripping open. Harry stops fighting when he notices Quinn behind him and scrambles to his feet. He apologises for being a jerk to her and asks her if she can give him another chance. Quinns brother stands up and punches Harry in the face knocking him over when he mentions a relationship with her. Quinn smacks her brother on the face and kneels down beside Harry before he goes unconscious she whispers 'yes' and kisses him gently. I'd wright that if I were you but I'm not so you can wright whatever you want because its your story and not mine. I just gave an idea. It's not the best but its the best I could think of..:( Hope that helped anyways :D
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    Greeneyes
    4 years ago
    thank you so so so much :) i'll see what i can do. xx
  • SarahG
    4 years agoReply
    I think she should survive. Beat cancer. As soon as she finds out, Niall is still on tour and she phones Niall and tells him in a sad shaky voice like she's gonna cry, as a joke, 'Niall, the doctors have predicted that I only have a day and 3hours left. I'm sorry Niall.' 'No, Lily, please. Do-' Niall could start pleading 'Niall, I'm only joking. I've beat cancer! I'm gonna live!' Lily could excitedly yell through the phone. Then Niall dropped his phone from the shock he is feeling. Then he can faintly hear Lily calling 'hello, Niall? You there?' Niall quickly picks up the phone and says hello but Lily hung up because she though he was away. Niall sends a text to her saying 'that's great, Lilybear. I always new you were strong enough. So happy!:D never scare me like that again though. That wasn't very nice. I have to go back on stage but I'll ring you straight after I'm done, yeah?xxx love you lots lils.:)<3 xx' Then move on to them growing old together. Having kids. Lily's hair growing back etc. OH MY GEEZ! This story gets me goin'!
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    Niall and Lily have been best friends since they were in Kindergarten. Freshman homecoming came around, and Niall asked Lily if she would be his date but go as friends. They had an awesome time, and after,...
  • SarahG
    4 years agoReply
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    Great update! absalutly 10/10. I actually don't mind where I come in to be with Louis. I can't wait until I do though. I'm so anxious waiting on updates. It's like 'oooohhh. What's gonna happen next?'
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  • SarahG
    4 years agoReply
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    Aww. No one will hate you because your update was deleted. If someone does hate you because of that, imma kick their arse. XD. Although. If someone hates you because you haven't got an update but you did have one, I think they should have the main role in a film were everyone is mean and cruel to all the nice people.
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    1DLove
    4 years ago
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    you go miss sassy!!
    SarahG
    4 years ago
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    Mmhm. Silly people these days.
    HaiiTracy
    4 years ago
    lmaoo. i love you for this ^.<3
    i love you anyways though. but gracias ^.^
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