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I hope to be an author one day... and I really wanted to give this a shot! I like writing little short stories... and I liked hearing feedback! Thanks for checking me out :)

"If you would not be forgotten as soon as you are dead, either write something worth reading or do things worth writing."
-Benjamin Franklin

  • Samwise the Clever

    No Such Thing As Coincidence

    I'm writing a movella for one of the contests and I was wondering if you'd give it a look.
    I can't really tell if it's moving too fast, or if it's going to be too long. Any help at all is great! Thanks anyways.
    Ranae Forester
    4 years ago
    It's definitely not moving too fast. I like how you establish a non romantic relationship between Grace and Braden slowly. I think you should emphasis the positive relationships between the grace and the dad and then grace and Braden as you continue. I don't think it'll get too long but if it does I don't think it'll be a problem. I like the gradual crescendo the story takes on which is why I don't think it'll be a problem
    Samwise the Clever
    Thanks! I really want to do well, and it helps SO much to hear this.
  • Samwise the Clever
    Oh gosh, I love Teen Wolf. (Dylan O'brien...)
    Love this!
    The Untold Story of a Beta (Teen Wolf)
    The Untold Story...
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    Lucy has had a hard life since her parents got divorced. She hasn't seen her dad in years, and her mother might as well be gone, spending her days buried under a pile of papers. So Lucy's use to her life...
    AliciaGilstorf
    4 years ago
    love love love DOB
  • Samwise the Clever
    How long should these be? I'm worried about writing too much...!
    Samwise the Clever
    Oh thank goodness. I was in the middle of writing the first chapter and I realized I was probably laying it on too thick... I guess you're right, huh? Thanks for the help!
    Ariadne Wight
    4 years ago
    No problem. I honestly don't know if it was helpful, so we might just end up disqualified together, but hey, they still let me submit it, so it must be fine!
    Molly Looby
    4 years ago
    There is no word limit :)
  • Samwise the Clever
    Omg please update soon!!
    Adopted By Hazza
    Adopted By Hazza
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    Darcy was a 2 year old living in a an Orphanage. Her father was killed before she was born and her mom died soon after she gave birth to her. What happens when Harry Styles adopts Darcy and Louis adopts...
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