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  • samasbananas
    I've noticed you've got a bad habit of not capatilizing things you should like names and beginnings of sentences, so you should probably work on that. Otherwise, it's a good story!
    Love and war (completed)
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    Rose, jade, Alex, Mariah, Amanda, jikke, marissa, Bella, Amy, and Olivia are in a competition called love and war, it a competition to win the hearts of the boys in one direction. For one girls are competitive...
  • samasbananas
    This is a good idea, but I feel that's it's not well executed. There are many spelling and grammar issues that you need to address. It'd also be better if you took some more time to introduce your characters and explain situations.
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    We all live with the objective of being happy. Our lives are so different but yet the same~ Ann frank.
    Rubikscube123
    5 years ago
    Okay thanks for the help I'm sorry I typed it on my phone and then used spell check which was a bad idea, I will make an extra effort to correct I'm so so so sorry that this happened I feel bad.
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