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I'm currently in the process of editing my first novel, Project G.A.I.A. a book about teenagers with superpowers. The first chapter has been uploaded here to give you an insight into the book, so take a look and tell me what you think :)

Alternatively, visit me at my website: http://sambanksbooks.blogspot.co.uk

Sam

  • Sam Banks

    mumbled "Back Again"

    3 years agoReply

    So, I'm back! I've been busy with writing and other stuff (like website-creation and fun things like that), so apologies that I haven't updated my Movellas page for about a year :L Anyway, I've now uploaded the edited version of Chapter 1 of Project G.A.I.A. Have a read (surprisingly, a lot has changed since I first wrote the story) and let me know what you think.
    I'm working towards getting it published, but for now, it's a never-ending cycle of edit/re-read/re-edit. I'll let you know how I get on.

    Sam
    Le Fox
    3 years ago
    It is a really good book. I think you've got a pretty good shot at getting it published.
Sam Banksaww yay! mine's on here :D I think I'm gonna have to work through this list too >.< x
4 years ago
  • Sam Banks
    4 years agoReply
    Aww thanks for the review EuphoniumGal :) made my day :D I've actually written the whole story but i haven't uploaded it to Movellas yet :D
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    Hi, if you have any books or chapters that you need reviewed you can just give me the names (or chapter) and I'll review. Just look for the chapter in my book, on your book (wow that's a tongue twister)....
    EuphoniumGal
    4 years ago
    No probs and I'm looking forward to it :D
  • Sam Banks
    4 years agoReply
    This is such a cool story! The only thing i would say is maybe you could explain some of the backstory a little - it was a little confusing with all the bonums and vapidus'. Other than that, i like the way the story is progressing and i love the way Kiron has a real personality, rather than just wafting around in the background :)
    can't wait to read more :)
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    Being different is not a choice, it's fate. Jetta Rowe was born to be different whether she likes it or not, and sooner or later, she will have to admit that no one can run from their destiny.
    Nita
    4 years ago
    Well, thank you very much! I will try my best to explain a bit more of the background but eventually, you will get the whole thing.:) At least I'm hoping for that! Thanks again, it means a lot!:)
    Sam Banks
    4 years ago
    hey no worries :) and welcome to movellas - i heard you were new :)
    Nita
    4 years ago
    Haha yeah, I'm relatively new, not to mention that English is not even my first language. :') But thanks! :)
  • Sam Banks
    4 years agoReply
    Hey :) sorry this comment is so late - my computer crashed last night :S

    anyway, i love this - it's intriguing, and you've created this suspenseful atmosphere, especially with the flashback in chapter 2, which makes me want to know how/why Cassandra's dad was killed. The boarding school part is really mysterious too - i feel like not everything is as "jolly" as it seems on the surface, and there's definitely more going on than meets the eye.

    Apart from that, i would say that you should slow the pace a little - Cassandra seems to rush through the first two chapters, and i think it would be better if you lengthened it out and gave a little more detail :)

    i LOVE the rain description in the prologue - it's really detailed and well written :)

    can't wait to read more :D xx
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    'The pool of crimson blood surrounds the familiar topless body...' Ever since her father died, Cassandra and her mother have moved to a small fishing town in north Yorkshire, and Cassandra vows to find...
    Sam Banks
    4 years ago
    ooh and i forgot to mention - i LOVE the cover!!
    Esme Peplow
    4 years ago
    Thank you! And thank you for the cc too XD
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