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This is sahaana. Five years olde. my big sister sabitha (MiaFlora) helps me write stories by helping my grammar and spellings also to make it better. I am a tomboy and dress like a boy. I love superheroes. I am in year one.

  • SahaanaK
    3 years agoReply
    Gorgeous story Sabitha. I love how you contrast the devil to the angel. I think Harry is the devil, but I think he is also the angel too of the story. I love Niall, but have to say that Chloe and Harry are the true couple of your story. I love how in the prologue, the last sentence is save me. The descriptions are wonderful, the dialogue is lovely, and the building up the tension is wonderful. I love how you portray Chloe feeling, and I feel so sorry for Chloe, she is such a strong character but she needs someone to love her. Wonderful writing. Your writing has really improved, and I think this story is just brilliant. I love it so much. Keep writing, I can't wait to see you become a real published writer, you have so much talent and potential.
    Save Me
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    Chloe Shell hasn't had the best of life. Since, her mother dying in a car accident when she was younger, and then her fiancé running away on their wedding day. Chloe has just about given up on love. But,...
    Sabitha.K
    3 years ago
    Thank you. Maybe Harry is the devil, maybe he isn't. Chloe and Harry are a wonderful couple I know. Thank you so much for your kind comment, if only I did become a published author it's my dream, glad to hear at least you think I have the talent and potential.
  • SahaanaK
    3 years agoReply
    Wow may I ask how you made it, and what program
    Divergent (Cover Entry)
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    I am following @Movellas on Twitter (username: @pizzaatharrys). This is my shot at designing an alternate cover for the film "Divergent."
    Adison
    3 years ago
    I used Photoshop Elements to sort of just blend the images before adjusting the color :) I'm glad you like it!
  • SahaanaK
    3 years agoReply
    This is a brilliant book. May I ask how many words on the total manuscript do you have. Where do you get your ideas from. How long does it take for you to write your story. What keeps you writing?
    Christina And Jack
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    Christina Jackson is a depressed teenager of 16 years. Holding a job at the local library, her only escape from the constant bullying is books. However, when Jack Marshall, the new boy in town, visits...
    Morgy
    3 years ago
    All up, I have about 50,000 words :D I was inspired by a friend who self-harmed to write the book and it's taken me about a month. Basically, I keep going because it's my goal!
  • SahaanaK
    3 years agoReply
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    I hope movellas do a USA and UK one this year. Maybe movellas could do the UK one in the summer holidays like July to September. Andaybe the USA May to July. This is just my idea but I would truly love if the uk one happened in the summer holidays. Pray. We just have to see now.
    Beth
    3 years ago
    Okay, can I just say that I'm sorry if it seemed like I was being a downer! Good for anyone in Australia who can enter that; I'd be just as happy if I was Australian. All I said was it would be good if we could have a UK one this summer. I'm not saying get rid of the Australia one, just add more; UK, USA, and wherever else in the world. That's all. Okay?
    Sabitha.K
    3 years ago
    I get that. I am glad Australiens get one. I understand, I hope they have a UK, USA, and other places one. I am from the UK, so I am excited, lets just hope for the best and wait and see.
    Am Southern
    3 years ago
    I know how you feel. I live in Canada and there isn't many comps i can enter either. It'd be nice to have one of these comps in Canada too.
  • SahaanaK
    4 years agoReply
    I loved this story. It had a nice easy to understand but interesting plot, and you wrote it really well. The story flowed really well and captured my attention. It was also sad, and I loved it. Good luck in the competition. keep up the good work.
    Your Guardian Angel
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    A story of a guardian angel, who guides the dead to hell or heaven. Everyday it's the same people, but one day the guardian angel gets a shocked.
    Sabitha.K
    4 years ago
    Thank you so much, that means a lot to me. Thanks for reading.
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