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  • SadKen
    5 years agoReply
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    Unfortunately this is not an original idea, it has been done many times before. Not your fault though! However the poems use of narrative technique is muddled and not really in keeping with the style of your poem. 2/10
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    A poem from the point of view from a tree in a war ground and what it see's. This is a competition entry so please like, fav and comment :)
  • SadKen
    5 years agoReply
    Probably one of the best poems I've read here. Keep writing!
    A Thousand Cold Empty Shoes
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    After a recent trip to Auschwitz I was disgusted at what I witnessed and I have dedicated this poem in an attempt to portray the true horror of what went on in these concentration camps.
    SadKen
    5 years ago
    Actually I take it back. It's THE best poem on here. It's just kids talking about rubbish.
    SusieSu
    5 years ago
    Thank you, means a lot!
  • SadKen
    5 years agoReply
    I have no idea if these are a joke. But they are so poorly written its funny. I am genuinely entertained.
    Flying Squid Poetry: A Minecraft collection of poems
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    This is a collection of Minecraft poems I have written. Thanks to Mist the Elf for helping get me hooked on MC. BTW the flying squid actually happened! It is not photoshopped!!!
    Swirling Moon
    5 years ago
    Thank you very much. They pretty much were just for entertainment. Not to be good.
  • SadKen
    5 years agoReply
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    If I'm being completely honest, it wasn't even 'in the style' of sonnet 130, it was just a slight modernisation of it. Unfortunately I didn't enjoy it at all. Keep writing though!
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    My entry for the Valentine's Day competition. My sonnet in the style of Shakespeare's Sonnet 130. Please like, as even being the 3rd runner up would be amazing!:)
  • SadKen
    5 years agoReply
    Starts off pretty strong, but kinda loses it towards the end. Also a slightly muddled use of enjambment, apart from that not bad at all :)
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    There's been a lot going on recently. I thought I'd put it all in a series of poems, if I can..
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